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First Time [Aug. 19th, 2008|07:45 am]
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A drabble/ficlet for [info]red_day_dawning

Title: First Time
Author: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Lupin/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 222
Summary: Virgin!Snape
Disclaimer: I do not own them.



Severus’ breath stilled as Remus’ fingers invaded him, stretching, twisting, turning, rubbing that spot *THAT SPOT*. "There, again and again," Severus moaned and writhed with the feeling of fullness, of possession as Remus’ other hand stroked, palmed, and slid slickly over his aching prick.

Sounds that weren’t words came from Severus’ constricting throat as he tried to keep a balance that was impossible.

Remus’ fingers withdrew and Severus whimpered from the loss. Remus pumped his cock and Severus fought to break free, fought not to break. But words, soothing words assured him and feelings that were too much overtook him as Remus positioned himself at Severus’ entrance.

Severus always heard that it was painful. Remus had nearly used an entire tube of lube. Remus was so worried about it, but really, all Severus felt was the sweet friction and the press of Remus’ pelvis against his arse.

The spreading heaviness in his arms and legs brought him closer to coming with every thrust of Remus’ cock. He wanted to speak, wanted to shout out how damn good it felt every time Remus’ cock nudged that spot, but words had deserted him, and it was all he could do to even breathe as he arched his back, wanting more, deeper, faster, harder until he finally let go and came in violent spasms.

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[User Picture]From: [info]torino10154
2008-08-19 07:29 am (UTC)

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Gorgeous. Guh! Lovely, dear.
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-08-19 07:37 am (UTC)

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Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]red_day_dawning
2008-08-19 08:27 am (UTC)

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Gorgeous! (I had to re-type "gorgeous" - it appears I was too er, hot & flustered to spell properly!)
Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-08-19 10:14 am (UTC)

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Hehe, aw, thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]drachenmina
2008-08-19 09:04 am (UTC)

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Mmm, what a great first time! Lovely! :D
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-08-19 10:14 am (UTC)

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Oh, thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]toxicwasteland1
2008-08-20 06:04 pm (UTC)

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Aw, aw, wow, so sweet. Severus picked the right man to do the job. I just adored this.
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-08-20 06:29 pm (UTC)

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Oh, thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]angela_snape
2008-08-23 08:43 pm (UTC)

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Wow, that was powerful stuff. Lucky Severus to have Remus as his first.
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-08-24 09:29 am (UTC)

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Oh, thank you!