| The Definition of Temptation |
[Jun. 14th, 2009|11:49 am] |
Title: The Definition of Temptation Author: sweetmelodykiss Pairing: Snupin Rating: PG-13 Warnings: None Word Count: 100
snupin100: Challenge #212: Temptation Disclaimer: I do not own the characters herein. All are owned by JKR.
So many scars marring pale, golden skin, a traceable road map of the life Remus has led. To most, ugly and unattractive, they are like a beacon to him. Tempting, alluring, exciting, and seductive, they call to him as he trails a long, pale finger across each raised scar. Severus watches raptly as Remus shudders under his touch. A breath, just a small gasp, and his name is whispered on the wind… "Severus." Severus smiles, satisfied that it is his name that ushers from Remus' lips. The immovable object colliding with the irresistible force and all is as it should be.
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Mmm, very sweet and sexy, hon! :)
Thank you, Angela! Still can't see, so I'm just winging it.
If you'd like me to beta something for you, feel free to send it over.
Aw, thank you so much! I probably will soon. I've got a fic that I've been mulling around in my head. Right now, I'm gonna ease back in slowly with drabbles.
Hmmmm, scars and snupin, an irresistible mix. Very sensual.
Delicious! Absolutely wonderful work.
Thank you! I think I'm starting to get back into the swing of things. Vision is still gray, can't write anything long, but it's a start anyway.
I'm so glad your back, even just a little! I've missed both your drabbles and your comments. *hugs*
It feels good to be back. I didn't have the will or the energy to write after the laser surgery, but my energy is beginning to return. I missed you all and dearly missed reading the fabulous fabulous fanfiction. I can't read too long fics, but I am reading the shorter ones.
Thanks! I'm finally starting to get some energy back. It's good to see everyone and to be actually reading stuff again.
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Well now, rrrrowl! Nice! *HUGS*
love, lore
Aw, that's really beautiful.
I can see Severus very happy with these thoughts...well done! | |