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Sharp on the Tongue [Sep. 24th, 2009|12:22 am]
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Title: Sharp on the Tongue
Author: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters.
[info]snarry100 Challenge #180: Tongue




Dark chocolate was not to everyone's taste, being too bitter for some, sharp on the tongue, but with an exquisite feel in the mouth. Severus was like a particularly rich, dark and sinful kind of chocolate, Harry thought as he watched Severus slowly remove his teaching robes. Button by agonizing button, Harry watched as Severus tortured him until he was mad with desire.

As Severus finally moved to the bed, he found himself quickly flipped onto his back.

"What are you doing?" Severus grunted.

"Hmmm, tasting you." Harry said as he licked a stripe up Severus' neck. "You're simply scrumptious."
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[User Picture]From: [info]joanwilder
2009-09-24 05:17 am (UTC)

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Yes! The comparison of Snape to dark chocolate is perfect--bitter but exquisite. Great drabble!
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 01:29 pm (UTC)

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Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]fancypantsdylan
2009-09-24 07:05 am (UTC)

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oh my, I'm drooling as I'm reading this, I love dark chocolate and I love Severus, now if I could just taste both together ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 01:30 pm (UTC)

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Mmm, that would be delicious. Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]thesewarmstars
2009-09-24 07:13 am (UTC)

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Nom nom nom. (=

Very sweet! Great job.
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 01:30 pm (UTC)

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Thanks so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]lilyseyes
2009-09-24 07:40 am (UTC)

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Oh, very yummy! The drabble and the thought of chocolate!
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 01:31 pm (UTC)

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Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]torino10154
2009-09-24 09:55 am (UTC)

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Delicious. What a way to start my morning. Great job.
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 01:31 pm (UTC)

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Thank you, and good morning!
[User Picture]From: [info]prayer_at_night
2009-09-24 05:53 pm (UTC)

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Oh, lovely!
You are so right, Severus is just like dark chocolate.^^
I also love the pacing in this, all slow and think-y at the beginning and then everything happens in a mad rush.^-^
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-24 06:09 pm (UTC)

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Thank you so much! Severus really makes me think of rich, dark chocolate.
[User Picture]From: [info]dementordelta
2009-09-25 12:59 am (UTC)

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Mmmmm! I don't know if I'm craving Snape or chocolate now! Possibly chocolate dipped Snape! Thanks for the lovely images!
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-25 03:31 am (UTC)

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Hehe, thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]keyairreem
2009-09-25 01:49 am (UTC)

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Well done! A very very good comparison
[User Picture]From: [info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-09-25 03:32 am (UTC)

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Thank you so much!