Fluidity - The Storm Within

sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-29 19:06
Subject: The Storm Within
Security: Public
Tags:author: sweetmelodykiss, harry/severus, phoenixfest

Title: The Storm Within
Author: sweetmelodykiss
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Pairing: Harry/Severus
Prompt: #7 Rainstorm
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Not mine.



The ominous, brooding black clouds that were beginning to gather on the far horizon matched his mood perfectly.

As well they should, for it was his own subconscious mind bringing them to life. The war raging in the desolation of his heart played him for a fool as the rain began to fall.

The darkening sky, the low rumbling thunder was nature’s manifestation of his unspoken words of rage finally freed.

Harry screamed his lover’s name upon the wind, "Severus!"

The void in Harry’s soul threatened to consume him, but before the calm, there must always be the inevitable storm.

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Snape's Angel: lightning
User: [info]angela_snape
Date: 2008-03-29 23:26 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:lightning

Wow, that's very powerful!

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-29 23:28 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Thank you!

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Claudia: HP Snarry tongue
User: [info]whatthefuckbenj
Date: 2008-03-29 23:40 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:HP Snarry tongue

I agree with angela_snape; powerful and wonderful! (Will you write the 'calm' too? =) )

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 02:15 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Most definitely. Thank you!

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firefly124: snape casting by decivitatedei
User: [info]firefly124
Date: 2008-03-30 00:25 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:snape casting by decivitatedei

Damn, that's intense!

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 02:15 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Thank you!

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spidermoth
User: [info]spidermoth
Date: 2008-03-30 00:41 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Wow! Very intense. You didn't kill off Severus, though...did you?

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 01:20 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Oh no, never. He's my man. Thank you!

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tjwritter: Snarry-On your knees potter
User: [info]tjwritter
Date: 2008-03-30 03:57 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:Snarry-On your knees potter

Wow! Just the kind of intense emotion that I love in my Snarry! Beautiful!

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 04:00 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Thanks so much!

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ivylady: Priceless
User: [info]ivylady
Date: 2008-03-30 06:50 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:Priceless

Oh, so sad. I hope Severus is okay.

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 15:19 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Oh, thank you! I couldn't hurt my Sev.

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apythia
User: [info]apythia
Date: 2008-03-30 18:10 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Wow! Very intense! Well done.

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-03-30 19:37 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Thank you so much!

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Your Royal Pie-ness: hp: harry expecto patronum
User: [info]entrenous88
Date: 2008-03-31 23:11 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:hp: harry expecto patronum

How intense! Poor Harry!

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sweetmelodykiss
User: [info]sweetmelodykiss
Date: 2008-04-01 00:50 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Thank you!

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